WALT: Write a recount using paragraphs, a hook and a personal comment at the end.
The best day ever 11/8/15
Yum Yum what is that smell? It is the yummy candy my friend Sam gave me.
The strawberry one is good and the raspberry one is good too. Whenever I go to Sam’s house we always eat candy while our mums chat. When we were there we made lots of stuff like purple bracelets, spotty headbands and Jewel rings. I did mine purple and Sam did hers pink.
Then we had dinner we had a salad it was good. Next we played with Sam’s Barbie dolls.I was the hairdresser and Sam was the cleaner. Then we swapped. Sam was the hairdresser and I was the cleaner. Then we watched tv.
Next Sam suggested we go and read some books. After that we did a word find. I mostly found all of them. We did lots of pages. Sam found lots too. While we were doing the word find Sam said’’our mums might not come. ’’So l said ‘’yeah and if our mums are not coming we can have a sleepover yay’’Then Sam and got all crazy.
9am the doorbell rang and Sam got sad because we wanted to have a sleepover. But Sams mum said we could have another playdate. Hooray! Hooray! Sam started going crazy again. Then our mums said we could play extra 5 minutes and I went Yay so we played tag with Sam’s little brother. We screamed with laughter until our mums covered their ears. Then I had to go home.
I liked going to Sam’s house because we do lots of fun stuff together.