We are learning to:
. give our reader a clearer picture by including adjectives in our recounts
. correctly place full stops and capital letters
· In my writing I will have included one or two adjectives
. In my writing I will have started a sentence with a capital letter and finished it with a full stop
Vanessa you have included several interesting adjectives. You have correctly placed full stops and capital letters.
To add more information to the end part of your story. For example "I had fun because...."